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中考英语高分作文锦集(北京卷)

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一、中考真题

从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于S0.词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目一:北京是一座值含着丰富文化的城市,这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等,都有文化的印记。

假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动,其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送,现就“Cultural Symbols of Bejing (北京文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言,推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志,对其作简要介绍,并说明推荐理由。

提示词语:show, traditional, love, treasure, important

提示问题:In your opinion, what is the cultural symbols of Beijing? Please describe it.

Why do you think it can be a symbol?

Im Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9.

……

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I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!

题目二:现实中,大到自然环境和社会环境,小到个人生活和学习,变化无处不在。面对变化,唯有积极适应,才能有所进步和收获。

某英文网站正在开展以“适应变化”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你生活中的一个变化,你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。提示词语:help,enjoy,new,challenge, take action

提示问题:What is the change that happened in your life?

How did you deal with it?

What have you learned from the experience?

There are many changes in a persons life.

……

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二、思路点拨

题目一:

本题要求考生推荐一个北京文化标志,这个文化标志可以是题干中提及的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰和手工艺品,比如故宫、长城、京剧、北京烤鸭、旗袍等。开头段要点明自己推荐的文化标志。主体段对该文化标志展开描述,如建筑外观如何,食物是什么风味的等;还要说明自己的推荐理由,比如它在北京文化中的地位,它的历史文化价值等。结尾段总结全文,呼应“北京文化标志”的主题。

题目二:

本题要求考生写自己生活中的一个变化,以及从中有什么收获。开头段要点明自己生活中的一个变化是什么。主体段具体叙述一下这个变化,然后谈谈自己是如何应对这个变化的,这个变化可以是社会的变化、自然环境的变化,也可以是生活中细微的变化,比如小区环境的变化、一个朋友在性格上的变化。结尾段写自己通过适应这次变化,有了什么收获,比如自己变得更细心了,懂得做事要坚持不懈等。

三、写作要点

题目一

体裁说明文

话题北京文化标志

人称第一人称;第三人称

时态一般现在时

开头段点明“我”要推荐的北京文化标志

主体段详细介绍这个文化标志并说明推荐的理由

结尾段呼应主题,总结全文

recommend, capital,landmark, structure, Beijing Opera, clothing,

实用词语 delicious, flavor, handicrafts, antique, palace, dynasty, magnificent,

delicate, precious,wonderful, be famous for

提分句型

1、 It is widely agreed that ...

2、It is generally believed that...

3、There is no doubt that ...

4、I personally recommend... as the cultural symbol of Beijing

5、There are not only ...but also..

题目二

题型夹叙夹议

话题适应变化

人称第一人称

时态一般过去时;一般现在时

开头段点明“我”生活中的一个变化

主体段具体叙述这个变化,以及“我”是如何应对这个变化的

结尾段谈谈自己从中得到的收获,然后总结全文

实用词语

change, alter, adapt, adjust, accommodate, unexpected, discover,observe, aware, notice, recognize, careful, persistent, improvement,

gain, active, positive, make progress

提分句型

1、It is clear that changes happen everywhere and anytime in our daily life.

2、Only if we adapt to the changes actively can we get improvement.

3、I have learned from the change that...

4、Unexpectedly, I found/noticed that...

5、To adapt/adjust/accommodate to this change, I tried to...

四、高分范文

Sample 1

Im Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9.It is widely agreed that Beijing is a city with rich culture. Personally, I recommend the Imperial Palace as the cultural symbol of Beijing.

The Imperial Palace used to be the royal palace of Ming and Qing dynasties, which is magnificent and beautiful. Its not only the landmark of Beijing, but also has the most important history museum of China.There are thousands of delicate antiques as well as wonderful ancient buildings, attracting the tourists from all over the world to visit.

As the cultural symbol,the Imperial Palace has made Beijing more famous in the world.

I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!

我是李华,来自九年级一班。人们普遍认可北京是一个文化底蕴深厚的城市。我个人推荐故宫作为北京的文化标志。

故宫曾经是明清两代的皇宫,宏伟而美丽。它不仅是北京的地标,而且拥有中国最重要的历史博物馆。这里有成千上万件精美的古董,还有美丽的古代建筑,吸引着世界各地的游客前来参观。

故宫作为一个文化标志,使北京在世界上更加闻名。

希望我的想法能被采纳。非常感谢!

Sample 2

Im Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. The Imperial Palace, as a place of interest in Beijing, is making great steps towards the world.

In ancient times, the Imperial Palace was called the Forbidden City which symbolized power and status

It combines advantages of many ancient buildings with amazing designs and complex structures. Every year a large number of visitors from all over the world come to appreciate its beauty. All kinds of treasures are displayed in the palace.In recent years, the Palace Museum has also produced cultural and creative products, which could be easily bought online.

I think the Imperial Palace is the unique cultural symbol of China.

I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!

我是李华,来自九年级一班。故宫作为北京的一处名胜,正在大步地走向世界。在古代,故宫被称作紫禁城,象征着权力与地位。它结合了众多古代建筑的优点,设计精巧,结构复杂。每年都有大量来自世界各地的游客前来欣赏它的美。宫殿里展示着各种各样的奇珍异宝。近几年,故宫博物院还推出了文创产品,人们可以在网上轻松购买。

我认为故宫是中国独一无二的文化标志。

希望我的想法能被采纳。非常感谢!

Sample 3

There are many changes in a persons life. Once I found something changed with my schoolwork.

When I just moved into the classroom of Grade Three in middle school, I noticed that my schoolwork became more difficult and more complex than before, which was a problem that couldnt be ignored. However,I tried to adapt to this change actively instead of being worried all the time .I began to study harder at class and reviewed knowledge after school every day. Finally, I found it easier for me to finish the schoolwork.

I have learned from the change that its necessary for us to hold on when faced with difficulties.Further more, only if we adapt to the changes actively can we get improvement.

在我们的生活中,变化无处不在。曾经,我发现我的作业发生了一些变化。那是我刚升入初中三年级的时候,我发现我的作业比以前更难、更复杂了,这是一个不容忽视的问题。然而,我试着积极地适应这种变化,而不是整日忧心忡忡。我开始在课堂上更努力地学习,并且每天放学后复习知识。终于,我感觉这些作业变得更简单了。

我从这个变化中学到,面对困难时,我们必须坚持下去。此外,只有积极地适应变化,我们才能取得进步。

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